I saw this picture from one of the clubs along with the other and had a feeling it was from the same artist. You have a distinct style at drawing people. ^^ I like the "fluid-ness" of the coloring and how you drew her face. The way you made her name and arrow sizzle is a nice touch. I'm gonna be honest the gold highlights on her hair don't look right to me much. I see what you were trying to do by adding a bit of the color into the subject to unify the image more, the texture is too different though from her hair that its more distracting. I hope that makes sense.